This girl, she blew my mind,
And blew a lot more too,
But the sweetest thing she ever did,
Was say, "I love you!"
I wont forget the times I've had,
All with her by my side,
And the only thing I truly want,
Is to have her as my bride.
I know for sure the day won't come,
When we both fall apart,
For of the many things she blows,
One of 'em ain't my heart!!
The first two lines are pretty good, but the rest is quite generic. Is it your own?
ReplyDeleteyeah.. it is my own..
ReplyDeleteThe poem's pretty nice. Perhaps you might branch out. Your pre-blog thoughts are very interesting. I've always liked little snippets.
ReplyDeletehehe.. yea.. me too.. but then not too many others do, unfortunately!
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